wow... its just........WOW! its awesome really!

Gorgeous piece.

I loved the flow of the entire thing, and how wonderful the imagery was.

I liked what you did with the title/summary. I feel that's almost as important as the poem.

♥ Alice

That's so mean! It really reminded me of the song I Started a Joke by Simon and Garfunkel. Idon't know why, since this was a lot more melodic than the song (sorry, boys.) Beautiful. This is my favorite of your poems.

This has a take-your-breath-away quality to it, as well as wistful, loneliness. Love the first three lines, especially.

*smile* and then *sigh* he got what was coming, poor handsome baby.

Very good, I also really liked the idea it was very unique. I loved the last stanza the best :) good work!

~the bandit queen

Marvelous sound and flow. This really captures sound well. I like the spaciousness of this. The abstract extension of thought that guides the reader along. Well constructed work. As always, a wonderful audible rush . MD:77.

Neat poem.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~