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| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abusevery bittersweet and well written |
| Boejangles 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseVery moving captures the feeling of love at the beginging stages. I can feel the emotion behind it, very moving. Keep up the awsome work -Boe |
| Jed Rainbow 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseDear writer: I like the way you write even so since it is best to give constructive advise so that we may all improve. I am not sure what style of poetry writing you are using. I can only assume that it is freestyle. Yet since I have never used it myself I am not sure what to say. None the less Kudos for the great peom.PS I hope everything goes well with you and your love. |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was really awesome! I love the inner rhyme and the line "Beautiful from every angle". Great piece! |