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simpleplan13
2006-10-04
ch 1,
abusevery bittersweet and well written
Boejangles
2006-08-30
ch 1,
abuseVery moving captures the feeling of love at the beginging stages. I can feel the emotion behind it, very moving. Keep up the awsome work

-Boe
Jed Rainbow
2006-08-30
ch 1,
abuseDear writer: I like the way you write even so since it is best to give constructive advise so that we may all improve. I am not sure what style of poetry writing you are using. I can only assume that it is freestyle. Yet since I have never used it myself I am not sure what to say. None the less Kudos for the great peom.PS I hope everything goes well with you and your love.
from beneath the bell jar
2006-08-30
ch 1,
abuseThis was really awesome! I love the inner rhyme and the line "Beautiful from every angle". Great piece!
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