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| prodigalXwords 2008-05-10 ch 33, | abusein my always returning boredom, i went in search of something to read. that's when i came across your story. since i read the first chapter, i've been forcing myself to stop so i could do things like shower, and eat. ahaha. seriously, i was drawn into reese's character, that i couldn't stop reading. i actually think i might have failed an exam because i was secretly reading as the teacher was going on about whatever it was. hehe. anyhow, i just finished reading this, and i want to say the only thing bad about it was that it ended. you're story is amazing, and i love reese and devon. i found myself growling at them MANY times for being so clueless to how the other felt. reese reminds me of myself mostly because she's so stubborn and random. haha. i just wanted to let you know how wonderful your story was! thanks for writing it really! |
| justalilcrazy 2008-05-10 ch 33, | abuseheyy...remember me? The one who asked if you had a coke infatuation?? Yeah, that one (I'm just going to assume you remember). Damn, I haven't even reviewed the last chapter...and many more...sorry about that, by the way..but anyway, here's my reveiw. Well, obviously, I loved it, which is why it's on my favorites list..along with a million other readers. This was SO FUNNY, it actually got me laughing - out loud. And I don't usually do that with stories online. But, seriously, R.S.V.P?? Where do you come up with that sorta stuff? And fabulous Devon, of course. That guy is great. And, what I like is that it's realistic, they still dicuss their college and all, it's not one of those 'we're together now let the whole world go to hell' kinda stories (even though I love those/ write those too, ahem ahem). And Reese is really one of my favorite female characters..she's independent and funny at the same time. Great stuff, really. Now I'm just going to stop typing and go away before I take up the whole space. See ya!! ~~Aditi |
| sleepieangelz 2008-05-06 ch 19, | abuseOMG! me too! i love the mediator series by meg cabot! i read tat series like 5 times...and yeah, jesse is like SOO hot in tat series. btw, sorry i didnt review til this chapter, but yeah. im kinda lazy. tehes ^-^ and i can't wait to read on in this story, so i don't usually review til i REALLY feel the need to. lols |
| Miss forget me not 2008-05-01 ch 32, | abuseoh my god!this story is very good.it may not be the best.but it was fantastic.devon and reese are one of my best characters.thanx a lot for giving us this story.u r really a talented writer.good bye |
| xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 2008-04-30 ch 33, anon. | abuseCan you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel with Reese and Devon? My favourite couple ever! |
| SecretFeelings 2008-04-29 ch 33, | abuseOkay, now i'm depressed fr some reason. I'm so gonna miss reading this, but I wont read the extras because that will make it harder for me to let go. Thanks for giving me something to do over my bored moments, this made me really unbored. Usually I read on this sight only at 8 PM because that time tv is boring and most of my friends d their homework then. And it was so good it actually made me read out of my usual time. ONly I think four or so stories did that to me. |
| SecretFeelings 2008-04-29 ch 32, | abuseWow. The top. Was so, beautiful. And the fact that I actually read it all is tell you something. I usually skip corny/sappy things. Isn't it soccerball though? not football... Well someplaces it's football. Anyway. That was nice of him. ^_^ And I'm sorry but it really sucks they are spliting up for college. If i was her I'd be crying like a baby. Hell, I cried when I graduated middle school because half my friends went to private/vocational schools. So is it safe for me to assume that devon becomes a great doctor, Reese does whatever she wanted to do (what does she want to do anyway?) and they get married, and have kids and a dog? Great story. Sad, but fun. Ima gonna miss the characters. |
| Kura-sama 2008-04-27 ch 33, | abuseVery cute! I enjoyed reading it very much. I wish I have a Dev! He sounds so hot XD Llamas are cute, arn't they~ That's my favourite line from the story XD It highly entertained me. Good job ^_^ |
| x.kirai.x 2008-04-27 ch 33, | abuseThankyou so much for the good read! I really enjoyed this, and I agree with your little author's note at the end about cliches. They aren't really that bad... I really liked your characters (Reese made me laugh!), they were very well developed. I read this whole thing from beginning to end in 2 days, and I'm glad I did so, because I haven't really found a story on FP that interested me in a while! Oh by the way, if you don't mind me saying there was one thing that I noticed, and that was your spelling of 'capisce', which you spelt as 'capeesh'. Was that accidental or on purpose? Anyway, continue good writing! |
| Pretend Jane 2008-04-27 ch 6, | abuseIt's like 1 in the morning here and I can't stop reading your story. It's so good! I checked out your profile and you sound just like me. You're completely my music twin. I can't believe someone else besides me likes Symphonic Metal and Within Temptation. You rock girlie! |
| SecretFeelings 2008-04-26 ch 23, | abuse-laughs- I /get/ it now! Reese Sylvia Veronica Patterson (i'm not sure if the whole name is spelled correctly), R.S.V.P, repondez s'il vous plait, please reply or respond, Responde! Wow, that is creative. Took me a while though. :| |
| cherrypiesizzle 2008-04-26 ch 9, | abusebarely unnoticeable freckles sprinkled over his nose It's 'barely noticeable' Sorry, that sentence just made me twitch in annoyance. I really like this story so far, but I think it seemed really random how Devon kissed her and came onto her. I mean, they've known each other for years...why now? He gave no indication he even liked her before, and then after he's all lovey-dovey towards her. It just seems rushed and hurried, like you're trying to construct a story and its characters but there's not quite enough 'flesh' to make it seem real. |
| SecretFeelings 2008-04-26 ch 22, | abusewas I supposed to just make him think I’d betray HIM as well? Hell, I’d sooner die than do that!! I'm sorry, her saying that just pisses me off. She already fucking did. Why is she acting innocent? |
| michelle 2008-04-26 ch 33, anon. | abuseloved it! |
| SecretFeelings 2008-04-25 ch 17, | abuseokay, question. the beginning of the chatper she made such a big deal about it. Why? I mean, I love gay people, they are so much better than straight people. honest-er most of the time. And funnier |