Heavens its just breathtakingly lovely, why haven't I seen it before?

(And yes, yes, yes! I did see your formatting on deviant art, and formatting does wonders, no? :D )

Come back and write some more, it's been too long!

-Anna

im sorry fictionpres doesnt like your formatting, but I like your poem and the title especially so that should make up for it...lol

I like the line break decisions. Each line is a distinct, if not complete, thought, which, for me, creates a simple, pleasing way to rotate 360 degees bit by bit. In all honesty, I don't know where this poem has landed me in the end, but I enjoyed the trip none-the-less.

sorry that fictionpress doesn't like your formatting but i really dig your poem. very nicely done.