Good work, another amazing work again! Such detailed capture of a moment of complex feeling...I can never have enough :)

i absolutly loved this...it's very to the point and emotional.

oh yeah, and the prompt was: Describe something that won't go away.

Well written! I like this lots. Keep it up.

~Anna~ ^_^

Good poem. Did the boy abuse the girl or something is that why he used to be able to make her cry? I don't know the messages always leave me for some reason.

omg i love this it freakin rocks!Love it love it love it!

Very nicely written. Your rhythm is great too. Definately keep writing.

It is so refreshing to see a poem like this, because I am so used to seeing the heartbroken poems, but this is def a good change. Great piece!

''as her eyes locked into yours''I really liked that line. Keep it Up!

all i have to say is: WOW!I loved it.keep writing.

hm...intresting...I like ^^