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Reviews For: Tunnel Vision
bratja 2007-03-12 . chapter 1
Oh, this was great..! I, myself, though I'm ashamed to admit it, suffer from this "tunnel vision" of which this poem speaks.

This piece actually made me laugh a bit. I quite liked it!

"Romances are
All about break-ups
Or undying loves
For the one who
Will become
Your break-up
Poem in a week."

That part was really nice, as well as the ending.

Nice work.
Guardrail 2006-08-30 . chapter 1
This is kind of a hard poem to review because I know that I could apply to the message here. It would be hypcritical of me to say "oh yeah you're so right" (although you are). But that just goes to prove how accurate your poem is. Great work and definatly keep writing.
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