 bratja 2007-03-12 . chapter 1Oh, this was great..! I, myself, though I'm ashamed to admit it, suffer from this "tunnel vision" of which this poem speaks.
This piece actually made me laugh a bit. I quite liked it!
"Romances are
All about break-ups
Or undying loves
For the one who
Will become
Your break-up
Poem in a week."
That part was really nice, as well as the ending.
Nice work. |