|Reviews for Fatherly Love|
| LadyArrin 9/2/06 . chapter 12
this was a definate "aw" factor.i'm glad grace is getting over her fear, sort've anyway.i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 9/2/06 . chapter 12
A very nice chapter. I can sense the tension between the pair. Keep writing! :)
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 9/2/06 . chapter 10
An excellent chappie. Quite interesting, and I can see that Grace is getting more confident. Jacob is also a very good character. The part about the confessionals rang true for me (I'm Catholic myself). I have alot of priest friends (rather, my Mum's, but we're still close) and mostly I go into the confessional to chat. I like both the external and internal dialogue. Keep writing, I love this story! :)
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 9/1/06 . chapter 9
I like this chapter. To me, Grace is becoming a much more vibrant character, someone who I definitely want to read about. There were a few glaring spelling mistakes in a few chapters. Just run through it again and you should be fine.
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 9/1/06 . chapter 8
Ooh, I really like the chemistry that seems to be going on between Jacob and Grace. I hope she does get more confident as the story goes on. I love the internal dialogue, makes the story much more inviting. BTW, thanks for the review! Can't wait to read more! :)
| Sleepless In Seattle 9/1/06 . chapter 8
Ah, okay. Lol, it takes me about two months to write a chapter and that's only if I feel like writing! So, I read your profile, and you're 30 and have two kids? Wowza! And you still have time to write a fantastic story. You truly must be Superwoman. :D
Seeyas, I'll be reviewing!
| Sleepless In Seattle 8/31/06 . chapter 1
Hi, I was just wondering if you have already written your story and that's why you post so fast. Because I love your stories, they're awesome, but if you just write these one after the other, you sure do write fast.
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 8/31/06 . chapter 6
Ooh, this is beginning to get interesting! I am curious to see what happened to Bill, and how Grace and Jacob's character will evolve. Keep writing! :)
| Jugglingbearperformer 8/30/06 . chapter 3
Wow I really like this story! Please update soon!
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 8/30/06 . chapter 3
A very interesting start to a promising story. Description and dialogue seems balanced, and you have created a believeable main character. Still, I would like to see a bit more physical description, particularly with the male characters. Keep writing :)