Reviews for One Shot No 5: Tough Luck

N. White 2007-08-23 ch 1,	abuseToo bad for Pete..I like the way you mix his thoughts in with the dialogue, it's way a way more interesting way to show he's nervous than just saying "Pete was nervous".
Kelina and Liliana 2007-03-21 ch 1,	abuseNow that luck is total crap. poor mime
grafiti rtk 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseThat was weird, to say the least. Lol. Loved it! So random...
Complications 2006-12-15 ch 1,	abuseSome of the dialog was confusing, but not major. It’s ironic, and dark, I wouldn't go so far as saying its dark humor. It isn't bad. I think it's just wrongly categorized.
Gata De La Noche 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is silly. But the cynical side of me loves it. Awesome. I love the deviation from the expected to the completely random. ery awesome. And guys are silly...
criti-sized 2006-09-17 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was a bit of a surprise. For her to say yes, then get killed by a stone. This one had me laughing alot at the irony of it.
Crazy Talk 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abuseGuys don't REALLY stress that hard, do they? Nah. They couldn't possibly. If they did, I might have to take pity on Will. But everybody knows that confidence grows on trees. you just have to smart enough to climb the right one...
inktube 2006-08-30 ch 1, anon.	abuselol...this is the best one...
The Un-great-ful 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was a bit ** up. Keep writing, Alan.