I like the little "trip" you take in this poem. Kinda like your intoxicated! I also like that it's different from your style! Very well done with this excellent piece! Thanx for your reviews and Keep Writing!

Sadistikal

fantastic - a little different from your usual I think - I really like the difference . Very well done indeed

Kira

I liked this, it reminded me of the life of a drug user or just someone who wishes to make life more interesting so that they can forget the troubles of reality. Great poem, very original.

Daze

I like !! Awusme ^ ^ very very creative and nice big word there 'oscillations '( it's not that big , but ppl have a prty limited vocabulary )