This is about the Titanic, right? I nearly figured, but I hate being wrong so I figured I'd ask you :P It was difficult for me to discern the status of Angelica's relationship with her beloved. She obviously adores him, but does he feel the same way? But then again maybe you did that intentionally.

You write incredibly well for a 13 year old. Just pay attention to your grammar and revise, revise, revise! For example, instead of, 'probably feeling intelligent about his ship knowledge' might sound better as 'probably feeling intelligent on account of his knowledge of the ship' ;) Otherwise, your description is great.

Keep writing!!

Darla, dear... tis wonderful... as is everything you write.

Actually, I'm quite jealous. You write so beautifully and so poetically... alas, for I am not you.

This piece was amazing. Everything so life-like and real.

Your word choice was phenomenal. It made your writing come alive!

Mah-velous dah-link, just mah-velous.