That was beautiful - very dark and very honest which I appreciate in any poet. Lovely work...

I don't really know what to say about this one except that I love it. It's brilliant, has a powerful message, and I can really relate to it. Keep it up!

Wow... omg, I can relate to this so well I think I'm going to read this at my poetry meeting!

very well done - It drives home the point without really trying - which is a good thing by the way because poetry that tries to hard simply isn't good poetry.

Kira

I love the repitition of this piece and the ending. I used to suffer from depression. Now it just comes and goes. Very well written! Thanx for your review!

-Sadistikal

I used to suffer from depression and this is very true to the theme. also, than you for your review on Unknown Origin.

Yes, quite depressing. But still a good write.

i love your ending words and how you repeated "This, I fear" anyways, good poem...