Very Uplifting and really sweet! Beautifully written! Thanx for the review!

Sadistikal

Very sweet. I feel the same way whenever I spend time with my two beautiful nephews.

- Pricilla Grey

Very interesting; you portray family in such a good way. However, the ending doesn't seem to focus on family, more on youth. It gets a small bit confusing as to what you're saying. Overall, though, there's some great imagery and some strong use of emotion. Just try to be more focused towards the end and you'll have an even better poem.

an interesting lighthearted poem. keep on going!

absolutly right! I know what you mean - I have a half sister and she has a baby Sammy he's a year - I baby sat him for her. compleatly brightened up my week

Kira

A very sweet and heartfelt poem. It's nice to hear from you again.

very true and sweet, I have a three yr old niece myself, and that is so true.