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| Dr. Colleen 2008-01-28 ch 1,  | abuse*Dances around* I like it, I like it! Why is love so dumb? Why are we so dumb to love?*tears at hair* *sighs regretfully and shakes head* Cheers, Colleen |
| Cecil13 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abusei liked it. I can definetly relate. |
| Captain Swatsenbeige 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseOk hehe, I'm infatuated with this poem, its amazingly entertaining, and I'm a sucker for metaphors, what can I say, the firetruck idea is just too amusing. And I have a thing for your format, it's insanely orginal, and I like that, its like your signature, or fingerprint, very nice. Your a natural writer, don't give it up. Captain~ |
| none of burt's beeswax 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abusei LOVE the idea of a fire truck boy. that idea is simply brillant, like, ** brillant. my god, mhm, i love this. but the bold face sort of confused me. was it supposed to denote something that i missed? anyway, besides that, i loveloveloved it...the idea, the imagery, everything. |
| je suis une pomme du terre. 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseomg i really liked this. oops sry i wanted to write more but study halls over! ja ! never stop writing! My Suicidal Faith |
| Jorda K Terre 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseA strange mixture of sweet and sad. Good job. |
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseyou really don't like heroes, do you? lol. i love the way you format your poem, simply amazing. |
| Three Cheers for Eve 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this - i most especially connected to the 'metaphor continued' part. |
| Emmytastic gal 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! I LOVE it. the emotions you portray are simply beautiful. The format is fabulous, as usual! :) keep it up. write on, -Em |
| candyaddict 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseI'm confused. but I definitely feel the atmosphere you're trying to project. am still confused. but hey, it wouldn't be the first time I had to reread your poems to get it! so deep.. as we call it here, chim! |
| CTWWFTP 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThis burns with how much I can relate to it. (No pun intended.) Well written. Very well written. |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was interesting. I liked what you said, no one needs a hero all the time, you have to do some things by yourself. ~the Stranger in the moonlight~ |
| Imalefty 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abusereally like the poem, but what really added to it was your unique style and use of bold, italics, and symbols. your other poems have this same unique style, which i really like. good job! -Lefty |
| Guardrail 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was really great. Your style is very entertaining and fun to read. I especially like the lines, "i can’t say he’s yours, either, though maybe he’s got your name written on him". Great work here and definately keep writing. |
| fairEtales 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseWow! I really loved this one. "you only see his license platewhen he’s turned his backand he’s walking a w a y." Those lines really hit me. Very touching. How did you think of that? Your author's notes are really interesting and are just as meaningful as the poem itself. I like them. Anyway, no deep comments today. I ran out of all of them on your other poems. Sorry, babe. More on your next. Wonderful job! LOVED it! |