this is beautiful.you are beautiful.keep writing, and send me everything, so i dont miss you so much.

I usually can't stand rhyming poetry, but I have to say, yours is ALWAYS amazing.

:-Dyayfor Ella and Gaby

I like this

very imagery-ful

yeaah

ooh and one small note:"With your heart filled with light," I don't know how it sounds to you, but I think you should get rid of tone of the "with"s.

i liked this piece a lot. something innocent in it, to me anyway. good job

Wow very good! It was written beautifully, the descriptions and writing style and all that stuff were great. It had a nice flow too. And the repetition of little boy knight (just the idea of "little boy knight) I love it. Great job, keep it up!