beautiful song fic, and it makes me yearn for love like that. hehe, hopeless romantics... :D

aw. i didn't know you were SO into andrew...lol. but that was so cute. a happy ending for once! i love the bit from "i have a confession to make"... to "my kind of heaven." that was excessively corny, but hey, my kind of corny!

beautifully written, as always. i'm starting to grow to EXPECT that. if your stories are EVER not beautifully written, i'll kill you!

wish on a star...hmm...the cynic in me scoffs at the whole meteor shower bit, but the soft heart in me loves it. lol. talk about guilty pleasures...i guess this IS short but sweet.

UPDATE TA NOW!

This was fantastic and amazingly cute. I liked the first kiss part, where it's written something like a play. The only critique I can offer is that you had an odd sentence here and there. And the lines: "Poor girl. I know it sounds mean, but I’m really not feeling too sympathetic towards her right now. I mean, how can I, when her loss is my gain?

Sounds like a line from Mean Girls, I know. But I can’t help it." While still pretty cute, the tone of these couple lines sort of contrasts the tone in the rest of the story. They seem a bit humorous while the rest of the story is more sensuous and dramatic. You could still keep that in if you wanted to, except I just suggest rephrasing it some way.

Anyway, this was some great stuff. It was absolutely adorable. I couldn't help but go "Aw!" the entire time. Keep up the good work (and update TA soon!) =)

I'm actually in awe that I found a story--story not poem thank God--worth reading on this site. That's not to say that they're all bad...that's not really the point. The love between this couple seems so sweet, so innocent, and, I'll admit, I thought someone was going to die. Blame Hollywood for that I suppose. The Mean Girls' mention was kind of cute. I have to say the beginning was my favorite though. Wow, I've rambled. I do apologize for that; it's a bad habit. I look forward to reading more from you.

I'm a true romantic at heart, so this really appealed to my romantic side. I think the well, 'moral' i gess you could say, is very true. Personally, i believe that if you really love a person, he/she should be able to make you feel content by just being there. But i've never fallen in love, so i wouldn't know personally. Anyway, very nicely written. I got a sense of the character's personality even though it was short, so the characters are pretty well developed.