My stomach sort of dropped by the time I finished reading this, but in that really good way. You've captured a moment I've lived but never exactly realized.

yeah...that's the weird thing about adolescence. anyway, nice work.

Funny how life happens, isn't it?

aah. the tranquility is so deep and welcoming, you can sing along to it. very well done.

sigh...happened to me too...what a nice feeling to finally find the real you, its a whole new worl donce you realize what/who you truly are. love ya

Hey thanx for the comment! and Great poem as well... i have felt this way many times... and i'll try to post some positive poems lol... Keep writing!!

Very descriptive without rambling. I love the imagery and the sense of peace in this poem. Very well written, I'm impressed.

Daze

sun-eyed girl... you'll always find yourself eventually. i like it.

Somehow, this is more than I expected. Very nicely done. Keep writing!

sometimes you just have to loose yourself. i like this poem because it's not overly detailed, but still nice enough to keep the reader interested. :)

pretty and just so gorgeous.

lovely. your poetry always makes me smile.

I especially like how you contrasted your inner peace with your disoriented state in the morning; it amplifies the resolution of the problem presented in the first stanza. Though short, it's a good, peaceful poem. Keep up the good work!

beautiful. just absolutely gorgeous. it's the perfect length and conveys such a beautiful message. i love this.