this IS going to be sad, but i'm hooked. adding to story alert :)

woah, strange. so he's possessed? this is going to be sad isn't it?

oh, i like this so far. i'm definitely going to go catch up now- nice start! very eye catching

love, Sam

Very very interesting story so far. I don't want to rush you or anything, but please get more chapters up asap :D I absolutely love your writing style, it just seems like it flows so easily. I got a kick out of Chas' mom though. I know a few crazy religious people my self. Like..my mom :0 Anyway, you're on my list, so update soon, k?

Wow.

This. Is. Totally kick **.

this is really well written and very intriguing. I dont really think theres anything else that needs to be said. Waiting on the next chapter!

Well, I like it. I didn't even find any grammtical mistakes!

Hm. Something is amiss, and we know it ends in someone being dead.

But you've written it so that we're not sure what happens in between, and that has me hooked.

On a more techincal side, I think the writing is flowing natural, and there's something very humanized about the writing as well.