I don't know if you notice, but you have so much vowel-sound variation in the following lines:

To dance beneath the dimming lights

On uneven floorboards that shift through the night

The resulting sound is very nice, as is the word choice.

i really love itreally really really... you get the point

comparing the house to you. wow, i really like this. i really liked "from these bare walls". but the entire thing is very original - i think. i would have thought that it probably was just about bad housing, so i'm glad you told me otherwise and made me realize this poems true beauty.

it's unique and uplifting. great great job.

*Lily