Hm ... I've never heard of someone wishing that they'd lied more. That sounds like the reflection of a complicated situation. Really complicated!

I like your poetry a lot, though this one is a little rougher than your last one, it still has lots of good points and merit. I think the message of this poem is excellent and poignant though.

Good work my girl!

awesome poem. i liked it very much. it flowed nicely. ^_^ great job

~rira-chan

nice work keep writing.

lost to shadows. ~erAced~

very reflective. it makes you think, particularly in the lines -

' i wish i'd been a more honest friend;i wish, perhaps, i'd lied more. '

very thought provoking. it makes me want to put myself in the author's shoes, relive their situations and see what's going on in their heads. nice job.

*Lily