WOW! This one is cool! I really mean it... I also like the way you write it... I mean, this one could be one of the best heheheh but I'll sure to read this if I have time. I'll be adding this one in my fave and story alert list. this one's good I'll be givin five stars to it.

great story i love it. some spelling errors and a couple of times you have missed out a word in a sentance and once before Li was revieled as a girl you reffered to 'him' as a her but other wise it is great and i cant wait to read more

wow great 1st chapter :] its kinda like one of those narration kinda thing in the movies with ur start. and it has a very interesting ending. kinda makes me wanna read more. *update more :)