Wow. you really are good! I must admit you write far more maturely than most people your age. Its amazing!Although some may find this a little frightening, I find it very interesting because the beautiful choice of words overpowers the horror of suicide. And you are right. When you die...the birds dont stop singing for even a moment. Life just goes on. (lol...i didnt learn that until recently in my English 102 class. (college stinks...lol).) My overall opinion...GREAT!

-Sarah