I liked it, but the ending was unsatisfying. It didn't make sense why she would feel such a need to cast a spell on the prince - I mean, it's just given to us like that was the weather for today.

And the fact that she made her sisters pretty and that was enough to make them all happy forever ... Doesn't feel right.

Otherwise, what a wonderful untold slant to a lovely fairy tale. I liked Pretty Wit's selflessness.

In the paragraph begining 'The weeks passed swiftly', you use 'gratification.' Do you mean 'gratitude'?

Also, it was unclear who offered whom the red rose.

Aw, that's cute! I like it. Good idea to write about the sorceress instead of Beauty and the Beast. It's got a very fairytale feeling to it, which accents the story nicely. =D

Maranwe Telrunya

I luved this !! I absolutely luv it !! No ne ahs ever tols the story of the enchantress who cursed the beast ! I luv the story !! To bad thats it ::cries:: If u like fairy tales u'll like Frogs,warts and kisses ,my remake of the frog prince ^ ^ . Please r&r it ^ ^