this is an amazing twist on the kind of concept that i was working on! keep up the good work!

Live forever, or die trying!!

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Yay! i love your stories, and its amazing that you can be working on 3 at the same time, since i can barely handle one, and never get it finished anyway. Im glad your not stopping the other ones, but this one is really cool too!! Im interested to hear why they wanted to create something that deadly. Im getting into the story and cant wait for more!

Another good one. This seems like it could be a movie or video game. I like how you get straight to the point without rushing things.

Oh yeah. I found a little typo. Since people tell me about mine, I'll do the same for you.

'One list strike, and the glass burst forth.' I'm guessing you meant "one last strike". Other than that, this was really good. I like it.

If you could check out my new story "Raining Blows: For Snowflake Sara" I'd appreciate it.

Dice Darwin

Good stuff so far. Nice description of the events. Tyoma's part was most interesting, I'd say. But it was all pretty well written.