Oh my god this is really really good, your good. There's so much meaning.
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It's scary, just how real this is. You've done an amazing job of putting it into words.

I liked how you started each stanza off with "boom" and the last line was just impacting. - ADD-san

Wow... that was a powerful ending... I love you!

one word: beautiful.

Wow! This was amazing. I loved the imagery used in this piece and repeating Boom! This was great!

Keep WritingSadistikal

Please go ahead and correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you've ever BEEN to Iraq. So how would you know anything about what goes on there? And if you say because of the "news", I'd laugh right in your face. Because the news is complete **.

I spent a year there...I think I know a bit more about it than people who've never been there, but yet everyone seems to think they know everything about a war they've never even experienced.

All politics aside, you're a good poet, so well done.

Wow, I like the whole anti war theme.

very well done - this is an excelent representitive piece for what is going on in the world today - very well done indeed

Kira