Wow. This was amazing~

Disturbingly amazing.

You're an excellent writer. :D

I'm not surprised that this story made you cry. It's very sad...and disgusting. It's good, but not a theme I would want to read about everyday.

That was...twisted.

-Ramen

wow. this was really good. disturbing yes but still good.

Oh, my god, this is so good, so sad and probably so real to some people. I like the style it was written in. Keep up the good work!

Wow. :( That's terrible. Good writing but it's terrible... :(

Poor girl...

xo

This piece may be short. But Damn... does it get a point out.

A scary point, a point that SHOULDN'T have to be made.

Amazing piece.

oh my god

i'm just speechless, that is just wrong...could a man be that vicious to his own flesh?

just whoa...good job, and i'm thinking that if maybe it was developed into a full length story, it'd be good too, but this alone is enough

really good

--Justine