|Reviews for Critical|
| CutUpAngel 9/19/06 . chapter 1
Loved it. Good work.
| sylvia's syndrome 9/1/06 . chapter 1
This is excellent. I love the feelings of barely-bridled lust in this (it reminds me of what I was going for in my piece “Red Light District” – I think you’ve done a better job). The subtle seductive undertones were very well done. I also liked your diction. It’s not flowery or ornate, but you give enough details for me to see everything in this poem in my mind’s eye. I try to give suggestions in review, but I can’t find anything to critique! Keep up the good work!