oh please, please, post another chapter
this story is so funy ^w^

This is a very good and very intriguing story. I really wish there was more of it to read (hint hint).
Anyway, Update if you have a chance! I'll be ecstatic if you do.
-Marie

Does the fact I laughed when Granny died make me a terrible person?
I hope not.

By the way I love Hayden...for some odd reason. Since the moment I heard about his emo ways. : D.
Ezra's pretty amazing too.
All of your characters are very distinct and rounded (in a characterizational [woah, that's a /really/ big word] way), not to mention they are entertaining as hell.
: D
Great story so far, and I'm excited to see how it progresses.

Oh god, this was hilarious. xD Too bad you've...disappeared...or died. Or something.

Ah well, I'll just re-read this if I need a laugh. :D

LOL OMG I LOVE THIS. WTF. Ezra is so weird.hahahahahahahahaha...

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xD This is so hilarious. Ezra really does cry for attention, doesn't he? But I think albinos are cute. I've had ever since I read one of my favorite books that had an albino main character. I couldn't picture him as anything but sexy, so that pretty much stuck to my image of albinos. I feel kind of bad for Hayden (well, to be honest, I think I feel bad for them all) because everyone's either ignoring him or making fun of him. xD But it was hilarious when he "killed" his grandmother. Aw, poor dear, it probably wouldn't of happened if he hadn't done his hom-o-sectal kiss. xD I wonder if his kiss with Ezra was spur of the moment, or maybe he's the one with an albino fetish. You're making a novel for Eraser? Will it be anything like all of this so far? If so, I'm in. xD To be honest, I like slash, but it's odd for me to picture Ezra as sexual...it's kind of scary. xD But I wouldn't mind an extra where "Axel and Ezra make sweet sweet love". xD Er, yeah...

lol i loved this chapter...
ezras 'version' of axels life... X-D

but no...
(i have to say),
ezra should end up with axel..
he is much much better than hayden X-P

Yeah... please don't ruin this story with excessive plot/ character development. Make Axel and Ezra go bonkers for each other and elope on the beach and make love.

omg dont put him with hayden!it makes no sense at all! ezra and axel together is way better! hayden is just annoying and emo! i hate him as much as ezra does! :) hehe you really get a feel of axel liking ezra quit a bit in the story so far! anywy great read i shall fav it wen i log in later!

Whay! =D

I love this, I need a good laugh!


update sooN!

This story is hilarious! It kind of reminds me of chuck palaniuk's novels in some ways. I really really want Axel and Ezra to be together and i kinda hope thats were this story is going but who knows...

Oh my ** GOD XD! I so needed that! I luvers you so much right new =)

Ezra makes me wanna go, "What?"

Just all the time.