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| diffident 2008-03-03 ch 1,  | abuseI love this so much--you have no idea. It's seriously just amazing. I love how it's symmetrical (reflected across the line between "And the sun rises and sets/In the smoggy city sky"), and I love how the capitalized "Age" gives it so much more meaning and significance, and I love the repetition. Seriously. marie |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful message, the imagery goes so well with what you're talkingh about. It reminisces that of hope and despair, which I find very appealing. Good job! |
| Guardrail 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWell written, I liked this a lot. Keep writing. |