you remind me of E.E. Cummings. He broke all sorts of rules just to write what he wanted, it's amazing.



Thats a link to a few of his poems, check him out.

Sounds like graduation, I think. Leaving is sad, lol. I liked the “f a r a w a y” part it really fits what it is saying!

tempest surge-seany

i absolutely love this, well done.Keep writing.jean

movie poetry eh? interesting...can't say that i have seen the movie but you described it well. nice work.

Ooh. Darling, this is beautiful! It really reminds me of whenever my ex moved to North Carolina.. and at the moment, it seemed so devastating, although we both knew we could keep in touch. This is -definitely- going on my favorites.

the word "delve" melts me