The ending is freaking blow my mind awayness. I was thinking the hell part... dude.. wow

very dark and passionate. this sort of reminds me of wuthering heights. that was my main thought on reading it. i don't know why, i guess edward reminded me of heathcliff with the whole tortured love thing, which goes on until finally he dies. it's a great theme, and i liked it alot.

This is very well written.

I love the theme.

All I have to say is wow.

I wrote this Freshman year for my English, and I got a wonderful grade on it. I don't know what you all think about it, but I hope that you enjoy it. Thanks so much for reading it.

Love,

Salma