interesting play of words and a fascinatingly cool and detached tone runs throughout this piece... it almost detracts from the spelling... do keep writing!

"Reasigning gods putty"

I like that line alot it stands out.

hopefull... hopeful

I love the personification of that first line... beautiful piece

Some good lines, 'Young and already obsolete' - 'Reassigning gods putty'

Good, how many neural pathways did you have to re-align to come up with this twisted introspection?

Review my work you scum ridden goat.