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Reviews For: Nettle of fate

tangelos
2007-02-27
ch 1,
abuseinteresting play of words and a fascinatingly cool and detached tone runs throughout this piece... it almost detracts from the spelling... do keep writing!
loveshouldnthurt
2007-01-26
ch 1,
abuse"Reasigning gods putty"
I like that line alot it stands out.
simpleplan13
2006-10-05
ch 1,
abusehopefull... hopeful

I love the personification of that first line... beautiful piece
The Un-great-ful
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuseSome good lines, 'Young and already obsolete' - 'Reassigning gods putty'

Good, how many neural pathways did you have to re-align to come up with this twisted introspection?

Review my work you scum ridden goat.
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