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| tangelos 2007-02-27 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting play of words and a fascinatingly cool and detached tone runs throughout this piece... it almost detracts from the spelling... do keep writing! |
| loveshouldnthurt 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abuse"Reasigning gods putty" I like that line alot it stands out. |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abusehopefull... hopeful I love the personification of that first line... beautiful piece |
| The Un-great-ful 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseSome good lines, 'Young and already obsolete' - 'Reassigning gods putty' Good, how many neural pathways did you have to re-align to come up with this twisted introspection? Review my work you scum ridden goat. |