There's some kind of beauty in these lines that puts a knife through my heart. I like this haiku a lot.

Well this certainly is one abstract piece o' poetry. Picturesque be very yes yes, reminds self o' RA Salvatore be banging Luis Royo ouch ouch. Great piece of haiku yes ^^ (I actually counted! XD)

Interesting haiku, I like it a lot. Keep writing.