Interesting format in which you wrote your poem. I think it really gave depth to your poem and helped to get your meaning across.

EB

I like the way you formatted this, so the last anything is way over away from the poem, distance can symbolize unfeeling. You have a way with italics & bold font that make your poems visually stunning, and this one's concept is almost chilling and somewhat depressing. Excellent, indeed this one fits the word excellent.

wow. i fucking love it. The way the 'anything' is seperated on the end is really powerful.I particually (no,i cant spell _) like the fourth stanza. keep writing.

Bex xx