Ah, the ironies of life... similar situations happen every day... it's just a matter of who's brave enough to take that last step... And who is truely cowardly.

how terribly lonely this piece is. i like that it is such a poetic slice of prose. the words are nicely strung together, but i think you can come up with a more original ending than suicide. it would be awesome to witness something unexpected in this story. play with it a bit. experiment. tell the reader a story he has never heard before.

thank you for reviewing be by the way! :)