It's always sad when summer ends.

Nice poem.

~Twilight Starr~

I like/loved this :)

gorgeous beautiful

i disagree with the main messgae, but only because i love winter and hate summer. but that doesn't take away from the awesomeness of this piece

(and props on the imagry)

The rhythm on this piece is spot on, and the rhyme sounds wonderfully natural. The whole poem just flows beautifully. Keep up the good work!