very nice description of everything. i liked the Armenia story (that's a country, but i could make a name too i guess) and the fact that Del isn't so perfect like most protagonists.

i hope the spell breaks and she stays a mermaid. i mean, what's the point of reading a mermaid story if she turns human

o.O , I love it ! Your descripiton use n this story is fabulous and very well done . I felt like I could actually see Del on the rock ! I luv it ! I must have more ,please update soon !

Please return the favor and r&r my story Frogs,warts and kisses ( my story is also a remake ,but of the frog prince instead )

Aw, this was very prettily written. You definitely have a lot of talent. I felt the description was overdone in some instances (it's easy to get carried away with words, trust me :D) but other than that I quite enjoyed this. Keep writing!

great story and even greater description! so far, I'm in love with your writing style.