i like it. Its quite abstract, but i love the way its written.Interesting stlye,and i love the imaginary.

Happy birthday for yesterday =)

Wow. I am so... confused. o.o

I get the concept of loneliness and being trapped, but I'm somewhat confused with the story.

Ah, no worries. It'll pop into my head in a few weeks and I'll be like. OH. :3

I like how it's written though.

woo. i liked this. it's kinda abstract so i couldn't really catch much at first, but i liked the Trapped part at the end. its like having two voices in your head that kinda thing. i'm not sure whether that's what you wanted to portray, but it's good anyway, what you wrote. (: