wow, that was really powerful. I love the way you incorporated the french into the story, it added a really romantic flair to it. Very nice, I didn't see one flaw in the whole story. I hope for more...

I like this read.. I do not speak much English, but.. I liked this very much! ^__^

The first time I read this, I had to stop about half-way through. Chalice's angst was getting to me.

I've always really liked Chalice. He's so pretty. I want to be him.

Mainly cuz Arquele is teh awesome.

But that's beside the point.

*dances* I have my OWN copy of this. Eat this beeyotches. *makes nasty gestures with her hands*

Well, okay, I loved it.

It fracking took me fracking FOREVER to fracking translate the first and last lines. But I got it.

And it's sweet.

Vero's kinda modled off of Chalice.

OMG, baby.

XD

♥

I'll TTYL on MSN, dear. Loves!!

--Karasu

Very nice! A new vamp! I like Arquele! I'm looking forward to more! and maybe I just missed it in the story, but what is the other race, Werewolves? hehe I guess I'll find out eventually. Looking forward too more as always!Ryumaru

WOW! That is about the only word I can think of...