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| kelloggs256 2007-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseVery sad, but again, great job. |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI like the ending... sad and beautifully written... great piece |
| Ben Wuest 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseIncredible. No time, but see my profile! B. P.S. Reminded me of Call Me When You're Sober some, were you perhaps thinking it while you wrote? |
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. this is really good work. i loved the 2nd stanza. |
| Hidden Lies 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME! *cheers* I loved this one, omg it is so F*G AWESOME! GACK! *standing ovation* -speechless- |
| Anna178 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuseI love "Don’t paint me the victim this time;" and the last line. I can really relate to those, and besides that they make a statement where they're placed. I can't read your mind, but I can relate this to my relationship with my best friend in a sense. Which means, for you, good job. ANNA |
| Nine-Black-Roses 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuseheyanother beautifully sad poem except there so much pain is poem. lots of it.u were right abt the last reveiw u gave me:)hope things are going okay. thinsg get better eventuallydo take carex |
| Jess 2006-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow Josh!!... can see there's a lot of pain =(.. but its good how u manger to make the poem so emotional... personally i beleivev that's wot makes a gd poem =)... also luv the way how u ended it =) Luv u XoXoXoXoXoXoXo |
| White is a Sin 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseaww! So much pain. Great job. Interestinjg rhyming scheeme |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseoh...wow...my world in a nutshell...keep it up XD --pammy- |
| Melanie Layugan 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseAs always Josh, excellent flow and rhyming. I also feel this poem has a lot of pain, yet hope for that endless night to become a clear morning. Love Melanie |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseHey Josh! This is really, really good, as always! *applaudes and gives many cookies*, GREAT job Josh! I don't know what else to say... hmm... Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |