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| Needa S 2007-02-09 ch 1,  | abuseI have never read anything like it before. You should write more and have them published as a series. Excellent work. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abusewell, this is different^^ refreshing read. i always wondered if other animals can experience feelings like us well done keep writing |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this... its somewhere between prose and poetry and if you wanted to make it more poetic you could shorten some of the lines and make it more stanzay... I love the whole turtle thing... great job... and thanks foy your review |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abuseVery different than most poems I've ever read, still, I like it.Thanks for reviewing my haiku! Glad you liked it!~Rowan~ |
| Panicking With Hesitation 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuseno... this was very diferent from any poem i have ever read... i likd it. keep writing. |