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| Kisa 2006-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow would you...do that with scissors? Ouch. |
| EnigmaticArsenic 2006-11-29 ch 1,  | abuselol- isn't that sad? no one appreciates symbolism anymore, i'm afraid. but yes- i definitely understand this, and i think it can be applied to many different things pertaining to the same idea. for me, mostly it speaks about giving up on a dream/path in life/relationship that you just couldn't carry through and which you regret deeply abandonning, but in a way, find it a relief you never had to take the test and possibly fail such an endeavor. or so that's what i'm thinking anyway. i might just be completely delusional. lol. still, a very nice poem. definite fave. |
| Ad Hector 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseso concise it crushed my heart. very beautiful. it's good you clarified this isn't about literal abortion. for me it's so many things i had to read it again and again. thanks for writing this. |
| EyesAreTheWindowsToTheSoul 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abusei really liked that... i love the line""Nothing is meant to be forgiven" I will tell it." |
| Scott Kinsky 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat Job! It could be about anything I mean an idea or concept, a relationship. Great, just great. |
| Cydney Chantel 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I'm not surprised that it's not really about an abortion... it's a sad, sad day for literacy when you have to tell people that they can't take everything literally. Symbolism is dead, and I mourn it. Excellent work!! ^^ |
| Weed In The Rose Garden 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good..You can really feel the mood it sets, I think..Great job |