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Reviews For: In The Eyes
littlemisssexkitty 2006-11-24 . chapter 1
aww, i love it,its really sweet but also shows a sad past, i really like it,
well done !
Aella88 2006-10-24 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem. The sentiments expressed, and the way you have done it. Short simple lists of 3 and then the grouping seperated by single words that seem to pack a lot of force. It also seems to progress from what other people feel about you to what you feel about yourself. It's like a self revelation.
CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2006-10-06 . chapter 1
Again I will say it's amazing how alike we are. That sounds almost exactly like me (cept for the lover thing, never had one, not allowed to date). I feel like I know you, Dana. Keep Writing. Constance
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