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| Embellished Heart 2006-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseWoah strong stuff. Loved the language used, great stuff. |
| cluttered soul101 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseOK, Wow...you write very well when your upset. I like the line "useless buckets of sault"that's hot... and, "Swallow my innocence so you can cry to me, I don't want to love you, but I do"there's a lot of feeling in this one..you know when you read something someone's written, and you can sorta tell that they've never felt it?I fel you...Nicole |