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SomethingNifty 2008-04-04 . chapter 1
Haha, this is another one that mostly any girl can identify with!
~SomethingNifty
Laura Schiller 2008-03-25 . chapter 1
I like how the nervousness shows through while she's primping and how her feelings start to conflict. And I like the happy ending. But why is it called Post Date? "Post" means after and this all takes place before. Or is it because you wrote it afterward?
videogameandanime-empress 2007-08-04 . chapter 1
Post means after...not before...who's Kate Moss? and what's Magnolia Blossom?
Susurrent Threnody 2006-09-05 . chapter 1
Lol. I'm loving the changes of attitude.
poetic abortion 2006-09-02 . chapter 1
"And put deodorant on my arm pits" - Too much detail, I think. ~__^

"And pretend I’ve got lips like Kate Moss" - What girl doesn't? I completely ADORE that line for the simple reason: it rhymed well and was beautiful. Oh, and can't forget relatable because what girl HASN'T compared herself to someone they admired? (Or boy, for the matter. But I am a girl and couldn't really answer that.)

Gah! I'm loving it so far.

. . .

Scratch that: this IS lovely. Really, excedingly, lovely.

The poem flows well; I can't say that often for the majority of rhyming poems that I have come across; and I REALLY love how you remained the voice of the person telling this poem; she is teenage and first-date and nervous and clever. I love the face that it is True Love or what feels like it, through her we can see slithers of such an emotion and relate because who's Significant Other DOESN'T make them feel like they could rule the world?

I love this, plain and simple.

~* Noelle
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