|Reviews for girl unperf|
| Audio Stardust 9/3/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this sounds just like me XD
| bipedalcooney 9/3/06 . chapter 1
I really liked this poem a lot. The rhymes were good and your words were very creative. I especially loved the line, "She ate the charcoal she hid under her bed". That just stuck out as interesting to me. This is a really great piece of work. Definately keep writing.