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AnotherDay07
2006-09-13
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abuseI like this. I've had that feeling before. That and Gaurd rails. Its weird. I'm not particularly suicidal but I think about things like that too. And opening the door on the highway/going really fast, and just jumping out. I really like this btw. I love the way its written.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
2006-09-03
ch 1,
abuseI agree - (i aint suicidle either, by the way) death has gotta be one hell of an adventure. just don't die in your sleep. you'd miss it.

good situation, very intresting - i've never seen a poem like this one on fictionpress

keep it up :)
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