beautiful! I think you'll like my story: Angel&Devil, its kinda the same as your poem!
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Wow LTO that was really good. It really struck something deep down inside me. Cant wait to read more the TVNOF. ^^ Bye for now

That was so beautiful!

OH MY GOSH! This is absolutely magnificent, a work of art I say! Lovely, lovely. The idea here is so creative and wonderful, I must also say unique because I've never seen a poem with this angel-devil theme before. It's very deep and strong, yet put so beautifully. A lovely theme/moral. And the writing was of course gorgeous, lovely descriptions and rhymes (the rhymes were great), it flowed so nicely. Be proud of this one! It's worth showing off!

Thanks so much for your review of Chapter 9 Hopelessly Devoted! I appreciate it a lot, as I am for any reviews. I'm glad you liked the story. I know I could have just sent you a reply but they're so impersonal and useless (i'd rather get a review than a reply any day) and besides,this poem was worth reviewing :D Oh, and Chapter 10 will be up today.

very beautifully written, i truly enjoyed reading this poem.