That was great!

This is nice! You might see it as depressing but because the flow of the poem was quick and rhythmic it lightened it a bit, so it wasn't so intense or oh-my-gosh-this-is-depressing. The wording was good, the comparisons and all that imagery, it was good.

And thank you so much for reading "Hopelessly Devoted", and even more, reviewing it and saying that you liked it! It means a lot to me, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

ah. so dark. the images are effortless and amazing.

'sunny days that turn to night'

keep it up ;)