Swet

Interesting format and nice imagery! Keep it up!!

~Mimi

I've been reading and reviewing all morning, and your poem is one of the only ones that I can't think of anything to critize on! Congrats! My only suggestion: KEEP WRITING!!

Love the visualization. Great Poem.

~Sol9

Very nice! This has good flow and rhymes, and all the descriptions and writing is lovely, very fantasy-like. Lots of imagination and beauty in this, good job! Btw, thank you so much for reviewing "Phone Call" and "Hopelessly Devoted", I really appreciate it.