  Aedian 2006-09-25 . chapter 1 nice |
  Penguins and Popsicles 2006-09-09 . chapter 1I love the ending! Keep up the good work, Wheezy. Haha. Wheezy.
Love, Mimi |
 Guardrail 2006-09-03 . chapter 1This is a really great poem. The rhythm is great and so are your words. Great work and keep writing. |
 sylvia's syndrome 2006-09-03 . chapter 1This poem has an almost tangible feeling of sadness and heartbreak about it. You did a very nice job of capturing and expressing emotions. Keep writing! |
 An-Author-At-Heart 2006-09-03 . chapter 1Beautiful! It was beautifully written, it flowed so well and the rhymes were great. A lovely writing style, great job!! |
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