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| Aedian 2006-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abusenice |
| Penguins and Popsicles 2006-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseI love the ending! Keep up the good work, Wheezy. Haha. Wheezy. Love, Mimi |
| Guardrail 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really great poem. The rhythm is great and so are your words. Great work and keep writing. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis poem has an almost tangible feeling of sadness and heartbreak about it. You did a very nice job of capturing and expressing emotions. Keep writing! |
| An-Author-At-Heart 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! It was beautifully written, it flowed so well and the rhymes were great. A lovely writing style, great job!! |